bill #2
hair raked over his head in greasy furrows, sewn with beads of sweat and dandruffy chaff. redfaced, liquid loose eyelids, he is indignant that our bathroom is again out of paper towel.
posted by jane at 8:21 PM
"do you even know 365 people?" says rk. "i don't know." says i. "let us find out" visit 40x365 to see what this is all about.
posted by jane at 8:21 PM
2 Comments:
thank you. i have admired the way other 365'ers are more metaphoric with their descriptions. i find i am literal so i was trying to branch out a bit.
jane ... I've found that other 365 writers are inspiring me as well, and you happen to be one of the folks who I study closely
loved the flow, and especially the visual presented by "liquid loose eyelids" ... you can't read that, and NOT see it!
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